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Anne Blackwood (United States) published:

Love Afraid

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Verse 1

Where are you
Tell me you're with me
I can't feel you
Until I start to bleed

I'm in orbit
I can't find release
Pull me closer
Or let me leave

Chorus

I want nothing more
Than "you'll be mine and I'll be yours"
But I'll set down my sword
If you fight me and not the war

Another moment, another blade
Another mishap, another trade
When will I end this charade
I can't live my love afraid
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your murder of crows (United States) published:

man'o'war

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once upon a time,
i was six years old.
and lived on an island
somewhere near the equator
where
the sand was warm,
and the sea was warm,
and the sky was warm.

i was playing on the beach, 
sitting at the shore 
with the waves splashing 
over my legs. 
a strand drifted on the water,
made of blue.
and brushed against 
my right calf.
it left a blue mark,
glowing. 
i later found 
it was the venom. 

i stared...

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when_breaks_the_dawn_light (United States) published:

Cross Section of a Writer's Brain

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where they to take a cross section of our minds
universes and galaxies would pool in puddles on
the cold steel table top

stars and comets would coat their latex embalmed fingertips
and they'd find the place beyond the black hole
where those teasing ideas go to hide

they'd place our planets in formaldehyde
and place a label on the jar- mindicus absurdus
and it would molder on the shelves, lost to time

puzzled expressions would flit to and fro...

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Extrasweet (United States) published:

Cracks in the Glass Ceiling

PROMPT: Gender Equality Op-Ed Competition 2022

    “The glass ceiling isn’t an impediment.”
    “Men should be resilient no matter what.”

    Have you ever heard anything akin to the statements above? All of them can aggrieve us in any kind of way. Gender equality isn’t something that a single individual can initiate. It’s something that many of us have to value. Yet, even a small opinion counts in this vast world. A small act inflates into a bigger act so everyone needs to...

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Qi (United States) published:

The Creek

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I pause on the bridge above
the glistening pale river reflecting 
swaying leaves above it

On this small bridge
hidden by the bushes and trees
I can breath
breath and breath

Through the crevices of intertwined leaves
when the sun sidles through
the soft sand floats up and drifts away
caught in the swirl

Glance to the distant
tumbling pearls fall from the rocks
ripples all across
the silent slow surface

The river is hushed
unlike the hollering of man ...

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lowkeyleah (United States) published:

waiting

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I'm waiting for the weekend
and waiting for a text
waiting for the shorter nights
and waiting for what's next
we're waiting for the album
and waiting for our scores
waiting for the mail to come
and waiting for what's more
We're waiting for a miracle
waiting to have some fun
waiting for our graduation
we wait instead of run

but what do we do when the wait is over?

 

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KiraLA (United States) published:

"Why Were You Shrieking?"

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“Hey,”

I look up. 
Up from my book,
Up from those beloved characters,
Up from that world I wish I lived in.

I don’t know how many times he’s repeated that word.

“Hey,”

“Hi,” I say, a little blankly,
My mind still reeling from the ground-breaking revelation,
The shocking confession that changes everything.
Well, everything within those leather-bound pages.
Everyone outside is just living.
Normally.
Like nothing happened.

Which brings me back to him.
What does he want?
Why is...

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kaylovesjesus_ (United States) published:

Take Me Away

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Ocean mist sprays my face
It’s like a warm embrace
Dress half wet
torn and bleeding red
maybe running was the right option 
from someone who’s led
but im just a girl from a castle
just wanting to break free from all the hassle
this time i wasn’t right
i should have stayed and not fight
everyone needed me, their Queen
but being only 13 is a lot for me
Take me away like the waves
So i don’t have...

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KiraLA (United States) published:

Laugh

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Laugh,
Laugh at yourself.
Because when you do,
They're not laughing at you,
They're laughing with you. 

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#LemonFanatic! (Canada) published:

Fast Tips To ALWAYS Get What You Want (and a great show!)

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  Here are a few tips on how to get your way every time! Cuz we all know there are those times when you just need your way! So when it's desperate (Don't use this unless you really need to, or the tips may not work in your favor) Here's what to do:

  First of all to get your way you need to get the attention of the person you are talking to. 
  Here are a few options.

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