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Deadly Luv (United States) published:

Mon véritable amour/ My True Love

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J’aimerais que vous puissiez voir tout ce que vous êtes dans mes yeux. Vous êtes belle, rare et extraordinaire. Votre voix est comme une cloche et vos yeux sont d’un bleu profond. Vos cheveux sont doux, foncés et brillants. Tu es gracieux comme un cygne, ta beauté de colombe. Votre nom ne ressemble à aucun autre, et votre voix pourrait briser les visages les plus merveilleux. Je te connais quelque part, que tu sois un homme ou une femme ou...

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Savoury Flavour (United Kingdom) published:

FIX OUR CLIMATE

PROMPT: Writers on Earth - Writing Competition 2022



                                                                                                                                                  Favour,
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Tardis (Canada) published:

Squirrel Tears

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It was supposed to be a normal day.

Those don’t seem happen often though, huh?


The first sign that things were wrong was when Squirrel saw the Flock leave the forest.

The Flock was a family of crows, they were mischievous and wise, always playing and dancing, the elders ready to tell a tale.

The second was the smoke, it was a choking thing, even from as far away as the stream it infected his lungs, the air was dry,...

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29 minutes ago

Jesica (Australia) published:

The Truth

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The truth

I was a perfect little girl, more a tomboy than anything else
Innocent and loving, my heart was open for those around me 
I always felt for those who were going through hard seasons in life
I was always there for those I cared about, and I never left them
they left me..


The truth

I’m hurt. I’m broken, I’m worn and beat down. 
Life's challenges and hardships have taken their toll
My once innocent, loving heart is broken ...

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35 minutes ago

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lone wolf (United States) published:

this fragile heart runs on venom

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i.
you know you've hit rock bottom when
you laugh at your own jokes to fill the silence,
direct melodramatic confrontations in the stage of your mind,
or realize that your tears, which had once carved hollows into your cheeks,
have long been shaken away, lost in the steady current of time that
you can't help but be swept away by;
but don't you remember
how you were so angry that your voice shriveled in your throat?
and felt so...
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about 1 hour ago

InkyBanditø (United States) published:

Operation Fallen ~ Prologue?

PROMPT: Textual Artifacts

I was scared to open the message, but I knew I would have to do it eventually.
It was probably from the Bureau of Experiment Containment; they were probably letting me know that I'd been sighted and they were coming to get me.
But I could always hope it was something else. I could hope it was just Caoimhe, I could hope it was Mom.
I could hope all I wanted. It wouldn't change the truth.
I sighed and clutched...

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about 1 hour ago

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Isabelle_ (Hong Kong) published:

Sunny Side Up

PROMPT: Writers on Earth - Writing Competition 2022

Dear Chief Executive John Lee,

Picture this—it is evening, silvery and cool. All is quiet in the hospital—all but a young woman in deep green. Doctors stand nearby, murmuring tersely. The woman is getting warmer, they agree, but few believe her fever is severe enough to warrant worry. One points out that the rising of her temperature has slowed—like the rocking of a boat, another says. This must mean she is “cooling”. Others, however, are not convinced. They say a...

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Writersblock5000 (United States) published:

More about me cuz why not

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More credit to, who would've guessed, HIACSOW (acronym for Hello, i'm a candy shop of writin')

And yes, I'm gonna be too lazy to do that at some point.

"What do you think about humanity?"
HAH! I already did a writing on this. I think. Ummmm... let me go find it. *leaves*

...

Ah, there it is! I think humanity is a bunch of broken people holding on to hope, and I believe that our hope can become real. I...

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Written_In_Water (United Kingdom) published:

Dark and dark

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Through a device that measures
The efficacy of my lungs,
I am inhaling wasps like a horror film,
The terror stopping my heart
Between beats
So my lungs are ridged with welts
And veins as thick, inflamed,
As starving attic spider webs.

I am inhaling wasps like a horror film
That I poured down my throat in the dark-
The rattling sound of my life inside
Disconnecting the pitch black railway lines
Of thought; carriages falling off the edge
And...

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Paisley Blue (United States) published:

facade of fire

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she turns heads, she lights a match
and laughs, and sits on the roof of a car.
spends hours wandering the lanes
writing letters, writing letters.
what a beautiful girl, she lived
in such a beautiful world.

how violently she was immortalized
how terrible the stars that spell her name
was she real, in the end?
or a novel, unfinished, left unread?

she paints boxes around her mind,
and dances to defy
the smell of smoke that haunts her,
the...
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about 2 hours ago