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please tell me how you feel about the piece, plus I would really like and appreciate a peer review. Thank you :)
holy moly - rarely i come across things that truly inspire me - this did, honestly so beautiful and magically written and the history is so rich and magnificent
i'd love if you think it would work in another piece similar to add a bit of dialogue - think that would be alluring
please please keep writing you are truly amazing