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'gravity is matter's response to loneliness' -the half of it

recent poetry (excerpts):

(i) cycles: ('we'll be damned if we don't get to fight back.')
(ii) here's what i know: ('intention is more than enough.')
(iii) evolve.: ('soon we're laid down to rest.')
(iv) cinderella: ('i wish you well.')

'seize the day boys, make your lives extraordinary' -dead poets society

What Should I Be?

July 29, 2021

When I succeed, it is simply luck
But when I fail, I don’t work hard enough

If I top the class, I am considered a nerd
But when I come last, well they think it’s absurd!

Because first I was told be loud
But when I am loud, I am quietened
And then I was told to be brave
But when I stand up, I am pushed down again

Yesterday I was dark, today I am light
Here I should stay silent, there I should fight
First I was smart, then I was dumb
They said I was sensitive, but then said I was numbed

I honestly don’t know, what do you want me to be?


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  • KanjiKat

    Why do some CA's have the white and blue alum profile pic and some have the pink and white CA profile pick? What's the difference between the two?

    about 1 year ago
  • Delia Rune

    OMG SunV!! I love love love this! Such a great take on this prompt. See you Saturday! :)

    over 1 year ago
  • Khadeejah bint Malik

    Nice one!! It's relatable, and it does have a powerful message.
    I'd like to invite you to join a virtual spoken poetry event on 9 Aug. I hope you do check it out, I really appreciate your participation
    Thank you so much

    over 1 year ago
  • elodie harre

    I love the way this was written!

    over 1 year ago
  • Writing4Life

    Happy Friendship Day!!

    over 1 year ago
  • ava_grace

    So truuue. Beautiful.

    over 1 year ago
  • Livsnjutare

    This is truth! Society pushes people to be so many things, even if they are the opposite of each other. I love how you really brought this truth to light! Just be you!

    over 1 year ago
  • A. Penderwick

    I love this, it's written so well, and it rings true. My favorite stanza is the third one, particularly the line, "when I stand up, I am pushed down again". I think it's so powerful, albeit maddening that that is a standard. Seriously, amazing job.

    Also- I love your bucket list; I'd love to play Angelcia too, though I don't know if I have the voice for it. hehe

    over 1 year ago
  • IMA Dragon

    The stanzas flow so well and the poem speaks very deeply to the soul. It was an enjoyable experience reading it.

    over 1 year ago
  • Writing4Life

    (also I must say how ironic it is that you want to visit Wales, and I live in New South Wales!!)

    over 1 year ago
  • Writing4Life

    Whoaaaaaaaaaaa Saanvi! This is incredibleeeee <3333333

    over 1 year ago
  • Wisp

    Oh gosh, the push and pull effect you give off here is so tender and it's so paining. You write it in a way that feels sort of bright, something that can roll off the reader's tongue easily, yet the meaning in your words is revitalizing. The contrasts you paint here, it's just heartbreaking, because the fact that people brush off our hard work as luck and tell us that we don't work hard enough is just so infuriating. Because how can they know how hard we've worked when all they see are the results, how can they determine for us our work ethic when they are not there by our side. SunV darling, you should not let people determine who you should be. Because they do not know you like you do. They are not there when you're sobbing over homework or stressing for tests or happy over the little things. They don't know how hard you work or the little things you hold dear. All they know is what they choose to see, and they cannot know you better than yourself. Don't put your value in other people, because you are a treasure, and you should hold yourself dearly.
    Replying: Your kind words always make my day. I think that piece was really more of an experiment, but I am so glad it came across in such a lovely way and was able to touch people. I've been trying out different things lately, and I'm more than happy to see that it managed to touch you the way it touched me, even if it didn't relate to the prompt haha. I hope your day is going well!

    over 1 year ago
  • sci-Fi

    "Because first I was told be loud / But when I am loud, I am quietened / And then I was told to be brave / But when I stand up, I am pushed down again"

    over 1 year ago