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Hey!
I'm Ali - a 13-year-old from Sydney. I play chess, do public speaking and learn French.

***Previously HORIZONSTAR***

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~ Joined October 2021

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Storm

January 7, 2022

FREE WRITING

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Don't cry, young girl, the raging storm outside, 
comes from where your dreams reside.

***
Beyond the vibrant valleys north, 
Past ancient Oakwood forests south, 
Through live, cascading rivers east, 
Up above the sea-washed cliffs of west,
to not a single place, but everywhere,
a haven for Spring season zest.
***
This uproar of nature,
this potent storm, 
Epitomizes its innate reform. 

Blossoming wildlife,
invigorating rain,
Beauties that nature will soon regain. 

So, little girl, don't be afraid, 
The Spring storm will shortly end, 
and only then will you realize that it is a friend. 

 

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7 Comments
  • MKenna

    This poem is amazing! I especially love the first two lines.


    11 months ago
  • one hundred forty-seven

    I don't mean to flatter, but you write as well as some published authors I know. You have great talent. I would read a whole book of poems like these!


    11 months ago
  • moby what

    this is so pretty but in like a haunting sorta way. i love it, so well written <3


    12 months ago
  • ScribeByGrace

    This is majestic and utterly spectacular XD

    Pls excuse my exuberant vocabulary right now…


    12 months ago
  • V-Rose

    It's beautiful! I love it!


    about 1 year ago
  • AllisonHRedwood

    Ahhhhh, terrific! The rhymes are so beautiful.


    about 1 year ago
  • Jasmin khawar

    So beautiful! Loved the way you wrote it.


    about 1 year ago