The Dying Rose

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Est. April 2022

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Night of the Bleeding Moon

July 18, 2022

The bleeding moon floats above me, her once white face stained bloodred.

 Why am I the only one who notices these things? The rest of my family is ohhing and ahhing at what they call a beauty; am I the only one who feels sad looking at her tortured face? Am I the only one who thinks that the moon has a face? I suppose it’s odd to think of the moon that way, but that’s how I see it; the moon’s craters are positioned in a way that they look like a woman’s face.

 Her face has always been something that saddens me, mesmerizes me; her expression is one of hopeless sadness as she stares down at her sister’s children, watching them destroy the earth, fog up the atmosphere with the toxic fumes of their smoke-belching machines. I wish I could help her, take her face and paint a smile over her saddened frown; but how can I, when it is me against the world?

 I have always felt saddened looking at the moon; but on that night, when her face was painted red with her blood – or maybe her sister’s? – the sadness threatened to overwhelm me. I wished for a better world, a world where the moon isn’t sad, bleeding; a world where we coexist with the planet, among ourselves harmoniously; a world where the moon doesn’t bleed with the toxic chemicals that we release into the atmosphere.

 I still do.

 I write for many reasons; but the night of the bleeding moon is the one that resonates with me the most. The moon may not have a voice, but I do.

 So I will speak for her. I will be the voice for the bleeding moon.


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  • Eblinn

    This is profoundly beautiful!

    4 months ago
  • mineForever

    Re: Thanks for the nice review! I like how you wrote about pollution in a way that linked to nature and beauty. So poetic!

    4 months ago
  • Holy_Grail

    Everything about your piece is brilliant.

    4 months ago
  • NightRain

    Re: “anything the US government deems bad is actually really, really good”
    truer words have never been spoken.

    4 months ago
  • typos, many of them

    beautiful piece :)) i still really love the message of this and the way the ending ties the whole thing together

    4 months ago
  • River Rae

    I really like this piece!

    Re: Wix seems like the best option. Currently no ideas but if I think of any I'll let you know.

    4 months ago