Shall I compare thee to a summer's day

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Hi! My name is Elizabeth and I am currently a freshman in high school. I love writing fictional stories and poems, especially ones that include a lot of figurative language. I'm so glad I can share these with you.

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A newly grammatically revised version of the original.

What First Love Feels Like

January 25, 2023

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Warm Fuzzy Feelings.............I feel
Like flying
Got those jittery little blue butterflies in my stomach
Oh no!
                                        Rising
                        am
    I
Help!
Before I
                Fall
                            Again
                                        ...Ouch
But it's that good kind of hurt
I fell, but it didn't hurt
I wonder why
But my heart is clenching
So I guess it sort of hurts
It's beating HARDER
OUCH
but I would
Willingly fall again
If I got to see you     s    m    i    l    e    :)
At me

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