hk12

Australia

hey !!
i mostly write figurative stories with the occasional fantasy text !
any feedback would be much loved !!

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a letter to the boy i loved first

January 24, 2023

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this is a letter to my first love,
the boy with the big smile and a pretty laugh
the boy who would hold my hand when I cried
the boy who loved me
 
this is not a letter to the boy he became
the boy with an unexplainable hatred for me
the boy who pushed me away when I needed him
the boy who never loved me
 
sometimes i miss who he used to be
but there is no use missing a fire that has already burnt
and so i stand this letter clutched in my hand
missing the boy i loved first
words am i right

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  • Extraordinary me

    Wow, this is amazing. I really like the way how described the changes in a boy which is very sweet. Ending of your piece is also fabulous. Great job!


    10 days ago